[FANFIC CONTEST] Round 1 - John x Cinderella

Round 1: John Vs. Cinderella

John's fanfiction:
https://10doors.rpg-board.net/t710-fanfic-contest-round-1-death

Cinderella's fanfiction:
https://10doors.rpg-board.net/t709-fanfic-contest-topic-1-death-drip-drip-drip

YOU WILL BE JUDGING ON:
- Excitement
- Grammar / Spelling
- Storyline

Please vote fairly.

Not shocked by the results so far >.>

I voted for you Cindy xD Not sure what other people see in my writing, but I will always think yours was way better than mine xD

Aww, thank you, Ylva! <333

Dang, 50/50. Good luck both of you! I'm sorry, I loved both of yours... Yours made me want to cry Ylva, and it was beautifully written. But I HAD to vote for Cindy's. Hers scared the pajeebers out of me, and it was full of crazy deathly excitement. GAH! I'm still feeling severely creeped out.

Again, sorry for creepying you out! *hugs Aladdin* I was going to mention everyone in 10 doors that Cindy met was down there, but I filled up the word limit before I could get to that XD

Again, sorry it creeped you out!!

*sees new results that appeared in the last 5 minutes* O.O

Btw, voted for you, Ylva :3 *hugs Ylva and little boy John*

*Hugs Cindy back* Thank you *-*
And don't worry Al, I voted for her too xD I LOVED her fanfic to death xD

Cindy is winning xD So I guess there's some justice in the world